You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotelPeople not happy with food.Write a letter for the same.

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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel

People not happy with food.

Write a letter for the same.

Dear Ms.Maria

I am writing to share about the experience we had in your hotel on 4th September in Capital room.

I booked your place for 4th September for ABC Organisation and it was a full-day event.

Guest were happy about the experience they had in hotel. They found the place very clean and staffs were very polite.

They even wrote an email saying that how glad they felt in hotel about the service.

We asked for internet services and services provided was excellent.

We had a Video conference across geo-location and connection was seamless.

Even though, we had a great experience with the place and atmosphere, we were not happy with the food provided.

I would like to bring this to your notice so that adequate action can be taken in future.

Food provided was very spicy and not suitable to foreign delegates as they are not used to spicy foods.

Also, vegetarians options were very limited. I would kindly suggest to take some actions in food department.

Looking forward to visit the Hotel again.

Yours

Kumar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Maria
Dear Ms.Maria I am writing to share about the ex...
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Line 23, column 80, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ce so that adequate action can be taken in future. Food provided was very spicy and not...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 61, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest taking'.
Suggestion: suggest taking
...tions were very limited. I would kindly suggest to take some actions in food department. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 31, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
... food department. Looking forward to visit the Hotel again. Yours Kumar ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 35, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to visit the Hotel again. Yours Kumar
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01685393258 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45821024865 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6095221669 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6923076923 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165351098728 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557741131168 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696637582057 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603389933433 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758364524729 0.0580467560999 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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