Advantage and disadvante of visiting Antartic
There has been significant increase in number of tourists visiting unique places like Antartic and Sahara desert.
Main reason people choosing this place is because of the unique experience it provides. We dont see such kind of hot or cold places in our neighbourhood.
Also, people are thrilled to visit such places because it gives them nice exposure to different experience altogether. On the positive note, people tend to know about the issue people face in these kind of places. This one adds value to life because people might get to know about the hardship faced by people living there.
On the other side, tourists are not planned for the travel and they dont have adequate dresses and other accessories as needed. For example, for places like Antartic, you need to have a good leather coat, gripping shoes, wollen gloves, thermal wear and scarf. Most of the tourists are not prepared well and as a consequence, they might fall sick. Other issue with the travel is people get food which they are not used to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f the unique experience it provides. We dont see such kind of hot or cold places in ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... to know about the issue people face in these kind of places. This one adds value to life ...
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Line 11, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are not planned for the travel and they dont have adequate dresses and other accesso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01714285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33065813601 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3644564639 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0555044730417 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249351122941 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548588761141 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520536450963 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726533296331 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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