You recently read about a computer course and you would like to enrol for the same.
Write a letter to the enrolment officer asking if you can enrol, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently saw an advert about the advanced computer course on the Internet, and I am very much interested in it.
Firstly, in the century of technologies, I have always wanted to learn about computer-related skills and it's programming. However, the school I attended did not provide computer subject which deprived me of its basics. This did not stop me, and I acquired the knowledge from manifold magazines and myriad websites as well.
Apart from this, my friends who studied in different schools also helped me to grasp the concepts of the same. My parents were also very grateful and they bought me a computer even when they were not able to afford it. Although I do not have the formal qualifications for the course, I assure you that I have the knowledge of the same. So, I would like to ask if I can enrol for this course?
Also, getting proper knowledge and a certificate from a reputed organisation as yours will boost my future tremendously. I might just need some special class at the beginning of the session to get in grip with the program.
Hoping to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Glana Christian.
- You are a member of an organisation and during a meeting in a restaurant the meal was not satisfactory and you were very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff Explain what was wrong suggest what should be done to ensure 73
- You recently read about a computer course and you would like to enrol for the same Write a letter to the enrolment officer asking if you can enrol explaining your circumstances and asking if he she will make a special exception for you 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I recently saw an advert about the advan...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours faithfully, Glana Christian.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8391959799 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80800674793 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5290468488 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209655444172 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759724835131 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969299737408 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101926162999 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688884474585 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.