You recently read an article in a magazine, which was very useful for your work. You would like to recommend it to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say
what was the article about?
where did you read it?
why is it useful for your job?
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. Although it is such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer. The main reason to write this letter is to let you know about the article, which I read yesterday and It will also help you to groom yourself.
If you run through this editorial, it showcases the whole process of how you can control your mind from doing wasteful activities such as spending time on social websites during office hours or how to set priority for each task. Besides this, it also guides you about the meditation through which you get control from the subconscious mind and give it to your conscious mind.
Furthermore, this is a good write-up, which I perused, is about how to control your subconscious mind from the newspaper editorial The Wallstreet Journal dated 3rd June 2020. It is a newspaper which is published in The United States of America and written by many eminent editors.
I found this article suitable for you because you once told me that you couldn’t focus on multiple tasks at a time. Owing to this fact, I recommend to read this newspaper clipping and implement these steps in your life wholeheartedly. You will see the results.
I wish you will touch great heights of success.
Warm Wishes
William Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-02-07 | majd.altawel | view | |
| 2020-06-04 | Kulpreet Kaur | 92 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend reading'.
Suggestion: recommend reading
... tasks at a time. Owing to this fact, I recommend to read this newspaper clipping and implement t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7610619469 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48863026612 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2274335835 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281007106521 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103643100492 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723822413102 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156037466072 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668920649646 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.