You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Sorena, one of your newspaper members from 2014 with membership ID: W53647. I read a very interesting article in your yesterday morning, 23/08/2019, newspaper. It caught my eyes as I saw the picture of my childhood friend, Jeremy, on the front page under the title of “A man from Newsphere.”. Therefore, I am writing to seek your help for seeing my friend with whom I lost my connections around 12 years ago.
In 2005, Jeremy came to our neighborhood and soon after that, we became close friends. We played every day together after school in the yard of our house. It was until 2007 when his father, who was working as an engineer, got a job in Arizona and they moved away. Since that time I had no contact with him and I missed him.
I hope you can help me to establish contact with him again. For this, I give my cell phone number which is 12746378 to you. Please, kindly give it to him as I know due to confidentiality you may not share his contacts with me.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as you gave him my contact information.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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| 2020-01-08 | ramyaram | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-08 | ramyaram | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-08 | ramyaram | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-30 | Ammu helen | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | Sorena Eshkoor | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59512195122 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68905729751 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9068611529 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4615384615 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30342414083 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984887872487 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598424401474 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158618929204 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572062976332 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.