You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Chief Editor,
I'm writing to you to enquire about a person whose article did appear in your editorial page yesterday and I hope
you can help me out.
I read Toronto times regularly and I just stumbled upon an article about Global Warming while I was
reading about the "Terrace Garden" in your Go Green special edition. The article was written by Harry Spencer who was my childhood Friend.
Harry and I met in Midland Highschool and we studied together from grade 5 to 10. We were good friends and we did our school projects and
science exhibitions together.
Harry left Toronto for Paris along with his mother back in 2010, since his Parents separated after a divorce and we lost our touch. However, I have been
trying to find out the whereabouts of Harry for quite sometime through Facebook and Instagram, but there was no luck. Now, thankfully I found him through
Toronto times. I'm sure you must be having the contact details of all writers who contributes to the editorial page. Kindly contact Harry on my behalf and
inform him that I had inquired about him and with his consent, please share his contact details with me.
My contact details, a short introduction about me and childhood picture are enclosed in this letter for your reference. Looking forward to reading your
positive reply.
Your's Sincerely,
Anna
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r editorial page yesterday and I hope you can help me out. I read Toronto ti...
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...article about Global Warming while I was reading about the 'Terrace Garden&a...
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...cle about Global Warming while I was reading about the 'Terrace Garden' in...
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...ds and we did our school projects and science exhibitions together. Harry left T...
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... we lost our touch. However, I have been trying to find out the whereabouts of Ha...
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...lost our touch. However, I have been trying to find out the whereabouts of Harry fo...
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...uck. Now, thankfully I found him through Toronto times. Im sure you must be havin...
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...y I found him through Toronto times. Im sure you must be having the contact det...
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...Kindly contact Harry on my behalf and inform him that I had inquired about him and w...
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...ference. Looking forward to reading your positive reply. Yours Sincerely,...
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...nce. Looking forward to reading your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Anna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05240174672 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52147013386 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650655021834 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.572362641 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33578517198 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100343845052 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690345102063 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10597469092 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731684830851 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.