Dear Igor,
I hope you and your family is doing well. I was elated to receive your letter and knowing that you are considering the options of going to University or to start a job. I being one of your closest friends, think that it would be better to start your life with a decent white collar job.
As far as I have known you, I can say you will not enjoy going to University due to varied reasons. First, the cost of attending a university is exorbitant. Secondly, you do not have sufficient resources to pay for the classes. Thirdly, your family is in middle of financial crisis. I think it would be better to address the need of the hour and you to join a decent job to support your family in the time of need. Further, you have excellent credentials which will allow you to get a decent job.
In addition, I think that you have good social and communication skills. The same would be suitable for you to make a career for your own self in the hospitality industry as the same is well suited to your personality.
I hope you will consider my opinion. Please, get in touch if you need further assistance.
Yours Sincerely
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... going to University or to start a job. I being one of your closest friends, thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44811320755 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51150343806 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0980100079 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3571428571 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270686706603 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101521923352 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746242145945 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179143970512 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409959173195 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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