Dear Igor,
I hope the letter finds you in the best of health. I feel so embarrassed to write to you at the first place. I know you would be feeling dejected as I did not come to your birthday party. Allow me to elaborate.
You and I have been friends for almost half of our life. In addition, I am sure that you won’t have even an iota of doubt about my sincerity towards you. I consider you my family and would in no case had missed you birthday. However, on your birthday while I was about to leave from my house I received a phone call from my cousin who told that my aunt was hospital, after having met with an accident and needed blood transfusion. As a result, I had to rush to be at their disposal.
Furthermore, I could not inform you as I had forgot to charge my phone and was not carrying my auxiliary cable to charge it.
Finally, I am aware that you would be annoyed with me. But, please empathize with me. Moreover, I have decided to take you out on lunch next week to make it up to you for missing a big day of your life.
I hope you will forgive me.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sed to write to you at the first place. I know you would be feeling dejected as I...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...ermore, I could not inform you as I had forgot to charge my phone and was not carrying...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, i feel, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19907407407 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34516675287 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6597137678 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4666666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38873005558 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13098868977 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844612218882 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203966787122 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703966692116 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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