Dear John,
I hope you are doing well.I'm glad you asked my advice regarding you to attend college or find a new job. As I'm your close friend and know you very well, I suggest you to look for a good job.
Firstly, Why I think you would not like college as I have seen your liking towards practicals more than theoritical classes.Thus, the college will bore you out as nowadays 90% of the classes are based on theory lessons rather than practical labs. Moreover, it demands huge amount of fee which is not good for your family financial condition at this point of time.
Now, It's going to be beneficial for you to have a job as your LinkedIn profile is already awesome because of you contribution to different technical websites and codes uploaded in well known public online platforms. In addition, you also have hands on experience in live projects due to your 2 months of internship after completing school.
Finally, As you have sound technical skills, I prefer a job in IT sector for you as a website developer.
Do let me know whats your views on my suggestions.
Wish you luck!
Xxx
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Im
Dear John, I hope you are doing well.Im glad you asked my advice regarding you ...
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Dear John, I hope you are doing well.Im glad you asked my advice regarding you ...
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...to attend college or find a new job. As Im your close friend and know you very wel...
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Suggestion: now
... a new job. As Im your close friend and know you very well, I suggest you to look fo...
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Suggestion: Thus
...racticals more than theoritical classes.Thus, the college will bore you out as nowad...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ondition at this point of time. Now, Its going to be beneficial for you to have ...
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...of internship after completing school. Finally, As you have sound technical ski...
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... a website developer. Do let me know whats your views on my suggestions. Wish y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56641781799 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668367346939 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5953829967 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.888888889 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 4.34317383033 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29037636852 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128862137578 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890657982862 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156875049644 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105727945458 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.