You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she should get a job
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Say why she would not enjoy going to college
Explain why getting a job is a good idea for her
Suggest types of ob that would be suitable for her
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. I'm so sorry I didn't write to you earlier because I'm really busy with my work these days. I Became so happy when I heard that you have an opportunity to go to college. Anyway, if you want to know my advice, I have to say that getting an appropriate job is a priority in your life because you have gotten married recently so you have to support your family financially.
In my opinion, if you wanted to choose going to college, you would have lots of financial problems which would prevent you from focusing on studying carefully. If I were you, I would try to get a good job. As I know you have an ideal opportunity for working nowadays. You shouldn't miss this chance at all.
I can remember you had said to me about the position which is in a large company in which they do the interior decoration. You have about 5 years experiences in this field and also have a good taste in decorating. Why don't you accept this position? I'm sure you will be successful. If I can tell you anything else, please call me.
Keep in touch!
All the best,
Sarah Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jane, I hope this letter finds you well. Im so...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: didn't
...is letter finds you well. Im so sorry I didnt write to you earlier because Im really ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
... In my opinion, if you wanted to choose going to college, you would have lots of fina...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...l opportunity for working nowadays. You shouldnt miss this chance at all. I can remem...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...so have a good taste in decorating. Why dont you accept this position? Im sure you w...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ing. Why dont you accept this position? Im sure you will be successful. If I can t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, really, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37019230769 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42433098653 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9848477197 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9285714286 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27040541318 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105177950659 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663913658936 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198807521415 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431476697126 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.