you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
write a letter to this friend. In your letter
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Rahul,
Hope your'e doing Great! I received your letter today morning. Firstly I'm glad that you asked me for a advice which is very important in your life.
My suggestion is you better join a job because B.tech a good enough course for aspiring a job and will have abundant opportunities. It your'e having any ideas joining in a master degree cause for enjoyment just wipe it because you had already enjoyed more than any other students as i know.
Mainly considering your family financial position in mind joining a job is better option for you. It will be a good support for your father also. I hope you will also get a good exposure towards life when your'e in a job.
Now a days there are better opportunities in Information technology field as you already specialised in that course I would suggest you to try for those jobs. Before trying those learn some programming languages they will help you in getting job quickly. Convey my wishes to your family. Take care Bye.
yours lovingly
Great Rahul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Rahul, Hope youre doing Great! I received your letter tod...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...ure doing Great! I received your letter today morning. Firstly Im glad that you asked me for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eived your letter today morning. Firstly Im glad that you asked me for a advice w...
^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ved your letter today morning. Firstly Im glad that you asked me for a advice whi...
^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Firstly Im glad that you asked me for a advice which is very important in your ...
^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...nd will have abundant opportunities. It youre having any ideas joining in a master de...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...enjoyed more than any other students as i know. Mainly considering your family...
^
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... will be a good support for your father also. I hope you will also get a good exposu...
^^^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...o get a good exposure towards life when youre in a job. Now a days there are bette...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...re towards life when youre in a job. Now a days there are better opportunities in Infor...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...owards life when youre in a job. Now a days there are better opportunities in Infor...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ould suggest you to try for those jobs. Before trying those learn some programming lan...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ishes to your family. Take care Bye. yours lovingly Great Rahul
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74157303371 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47688467785 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2531530457 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257059904989 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940397240731 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494157414341 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163886433038 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172650931609 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.