Dear Sally,
I was delighted to receive a letter from you last week. I am doing very well, thank you. I hope you are keeping well too.
First of all, congratulations on completing your graduation course in engineering with flying colors. There are very few candidates who earn a distinction in this course and i am glad that you are one of them. I am sure that this will be the first step for you to get into a good organization to begin your career.
Many aver that college life is more of enjoyment than learning. So would have been until graduation. However, post graduation college is not for enjoyment. It is a serious business with strict adherence to quality and timelines. These courses are advanced professional courses which require dedication and discipline to ensure their effectiveness and earn grades.
Most of the post graduation courses would be relevant after a few years of work experience in the related field. My suggestion would be that you take a job. This would give you a chance to explore your area of interest and expertise should you wish to change your mind for course higher education. Your job would enable you to save some money for post graduation course as well.
I hope you would make up your mind soon. Take care.
Regards,
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... week. I am doing very well, thank you. I hope you are keeping well too. First...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o earn a distinction in this course and i am glad that you are one of them. I am ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78828828829 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65509496233 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6871353869 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4375 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231753246237 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692077879466 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060580169638 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124866273977 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501673837062 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.