You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear XYZ,
I have received your letter yesterday, wherein you have sought an opinion about getting an admission in the college or to taking up any job.
I will try to give my best opinion, considering your goal of pursuing a career in the engineering discipline, and ultimately starting your own business. I would suggest you take a gap year and start a job.
By taking a gap year and doing some job, you will not only accumulate practical knowledge of business but also earn money, which you can use to pay for your college next year. If you take an admission in college by borrowing money from your family, you won’t feel satisfied and enjoy your studies as it’s against your conscience. I know that you always wanted to be self-reliant for your own needs.
If you take a gap year and do some jobs, you will be preparing yourself for your ultimate objective. There are many entry-level job ads appear in the national newspaper and apply for I.T. Assistant or Chef jobs, which are your hobbies.
Yours truly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58363200185 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5981849702 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254284148902 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111832910076 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526308834834 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163261028656 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525615157405 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.