You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to
go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
I am writing this letter to you to tell you that you'd rather not to choose college as an important purpose for your rest of professional life. Actually, I have done this choice before and now I regret. As you remember I was a top student in my college, however, I have a variety of problems after graduation and when I was seeking a job.
I should confess that you might learn nothing essential for your future career in college because the majority of your professional skills achieved by job experience and job training. You might be such a smart and talented person in college but later when you start your job, your education would begin as well.
If you hired into a company, it would have made an opportunity for you to improve in your professional field and gain success rapidly. As a matter of fact each year you learn a lot of things in many aspects rather than your major, such as punctuality, responsibility, team working, problem solving, ... In fact, such these skills need practical practice and it is not just a theory that your teacher said and you have learnt.
First of all, you had better search your favourite field in which you prefer to work for the future. Second, try to learn every essential information related to your interest. Third try to find a related job and for sure you may get the lowest position in that field. you had better be ambitious and hard working. In my point of view, some jobs suitable for you based on your introverted characteristic are being a programmer or accountant or web designer maybe a decoration designer and jobs like that which needs experience rather than academic knowledge.
I would be happy to hear from you soon and let me know about your decision. Keep in touch with me and say hello to your mother.
Best wishes.
Maryam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
...ing this letter to you to tell you that youd rather not to choose college as an impo...
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Line 8, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... get the lowest position in that field. you had better be ambitious and hard workin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, well, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67084639498 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56934299725 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 127.690721649 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579937304075 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9654157691 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292970057831 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974975385561 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638475072409 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167493928815 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463574670325 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.