Dear Raj,
I appreciate you writing to me for suggestion about job or college, If you ask me I think you should get a job rather than going to college.
As you have completed your graduation in IT, I would suggest to take hands on experience on your area of expertise. Going for further education is always a good idea but currently you must focus on getting a job and exploring the industry requirements. This will help you in two ways , first, you will start earning through which you can save for further education. Secondly, you will be receiving experience that will be added to your profile which will benefit in years to come.
Going to college now will add extra burden on your parents in terms of fees, living cost and many more. While on the other hand it will also be not beneficial for you as without experience you may not get admission in a good college as all reputed universities ask for some work exposure.
You can seek out job in the data science market which is currently booming and requires large number of professional. It will also back what you have studied in your graduation and would be a good learning curve. Along with that if you need to find a different challenge you can go for teach for India where you can share your knowledge to the kids.
I hope this will help you to figure out the path that you need to choose.
Yous Faithfully,
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest taking'.
Suggestion: suggest taking
...ompleted your graduation in IT, I would suggest to take hands on experience on your area of exp...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irements. This will help you in two ways , first, you will start earning through w...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther hand it will also be not beneficial for you as without experience you may no...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f you need to find a different challenge you can go for teach for India where you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 4.92783505155 406% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53174603175 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46015601859 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6101418743 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280838519121 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113730006573 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661897519516 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183604279556 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580361383411 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.