You recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-Speaking friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed jobs
-Describe tour new job
-tellhim/her your other news
Dear Rebecca,
Hope you are doing well. it has been a long time since we spoke. I would like to tell you that I have changed my job recently. Basically, my old employers have faced a serious decline in their progress. so, they were firing those who have been on the higher positions to maintain their budget. Before they presented a rustication letter I prefered to leave that organization.
Meanwhile, I have applied for couple of opportunities two weeks before the resignation. I am super-excited to tell you that I have a new opportunity in my city.
Now it will be more convenient for me to go to the Whispcross hospital. it takes around 30 minutes to travel by bus. Since my earlier institute was located far away and I have to embark a bus, then a train to my destination. it was a bizarre situation for me!
The most exciting thing is that they have offered me a car so that I can do my tasks in a better way. Though, they have assigned the on-call duties and audit controller responsibility for me that comes with senior position but I am contented!
This news will raise your excitement to sky-high that I have constructed a new flat for my family to live in. Its architecture is mesmerizing! I can assure that you will be overwhelmed by visiting my newly furnished property. I would like to have a cup of tea with you in there!
Hope to see you soon!
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ar Rebecca, Hope you are doing well. it has been a long time since we spoke. I ...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ed a serious decline in their progress. so, they were firing those who have been o...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her positions to maintain their budget. Before they presented a rustication letter I p...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...or me to go to the Whispcross hospital. it takes around 30 minutes to travel by bu...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... a bus, then a train to my destination. it was a bizarre situation for me! The...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith senior position but I am contented! This news will raise your excitement to ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8495489912 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3919146256 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121522552266 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449111685296 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556290063654 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648741989045 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484031648914 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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