Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to complaint about your service. I am moorthi,I had stayed in your hotel at this august 2. You gave me a room(278) which looked elegantly but failed to afford the comfort due to the problem of heating unit.
When I entered your hotel the climate were unusual by the sudden storm, I thought your(4 star hotel) might be appropriate to stay.But my complete thoughts had collapsed after switch on the heater that did not work. Immediately I called reception,they sent a technician and he told that the heating unit burnt utterly, we will change it as soon as possible. But he did not come again, I completely disappointed with his service and i had to spent entire night with heavy cold.Eventually i vacated your hotel on first day,but I had planned to stay there 3 days.
As a friend I suggest you please induct a deserve person who obey the rules and regulation, hope it will not happen again .
yours lovingly.
moorthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89937106918 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9596175323 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735849056604 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 16.3608247423 324% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.951564539 44.8134815571 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.666666667 76.5299724578 339% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 16.8248392259 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190555933659 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948513684515 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053916063614 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10686116378 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609688135459 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 8.37731958763 335% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 70.7449484536 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 7.45979381443 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 7.59969072165 136% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 8.54432989691 272% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 8.15463917526 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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