Education is the unrivalled thing in this globe to estimate the growth of the country and individually. However, if it is free of cost to the infants, the consequence of future would be fruitful to both of government and children and the reasons are summarized below.
First and foremost, nowadays in this sophisticated society, literacy is the prime yardstick to evaluate the people. Education is essential to survive in this globe, if it available at free of cost only, it will reach to all sort of people, especially the one who can not pay their fees and with acumen, would get a great chance to apprise their competency. In addition to this, the countries economy is dictated by the amount the education is prevalent, so it is vital to every toddlers to raise the status of country.
Furthermore, if the government pay the fees to the all sort of education then it will be available to every one and they can retract the money more than 100 folds by paying tax after settling the appropriate job by their knowledge. For instance, the developed countries like, Canada and German are the testimony of successful implementation of free education to till secondary, now they are the pinnace of victory amid this world in terms of economy, peace and delight.
On contrary to this, if the government do not implement the ordinance to this phenomenon, affluent people will be more royal and impoverished people will be lower than now due to the lacking of money, and also the growth of the country too will be remain the same. For example, the countries like India and Pakistan are do not worry about the fundamental thing of education, now struggling to maintain their economy and growth due to the discrimination of rich and poor.
To sum up this, it seems to me that the prosperous and pleasant life of both people and country will be available only, when every one get the literacy by an endeavour of government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion:
...n then it will be available to every one and they can retract the money more than...
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Suggestion: done
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78678678679 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78254440471 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.963063805 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.4 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142254774292 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580163842993 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343144839392 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817911079734 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300134077156 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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