Dear Toni,
How are you and your family? It’s being so long since we last were in touch, but I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful time we spend together last year.
I am writing this letter to apologies to you for not able to meet you during my visit to San Jose. As we decided unanimously that we will catch up whenever I will visit there and spend time with each other. Unfortunately, I had to revise my plan due to hectic schedule over that weekend.
Firstly, I had planned three days’ tour to San Jose, two days for business and one day was kept for leisure in the pipeline. On the first day, there was a business conference lined up on for full day followed by clients’ meetings the very next day. Regrettably, the client meetings couldn’t be wrapped up on the second day and we had to extend it to next day. Even though, I didn’t want it, but I was helpless on this matter.
Never though, we can still plan to give each other a visit. I remember you have mentioned about a wedding of one of your friend coming up in San Francisco. As San Francisco is 100 miles drive from my city, I can show up there and we can certainly hangout together.
I hope to see you soon.
Warm Regards,
Anh Vu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35964912281 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40450101173 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9023619256 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22769237573 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865992932914 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924424050097 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1365017708 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046386361024 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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