Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session Write a letter to your manager and say What is the topic of presentation What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic What are your requirements for conducting t

Dear James,

I am writing this letter in continuation of our conversation held last week. You had asked me to prepare a presentation for upcoming training session scheduled next month.

I am pleased to inform you that I have chosen the topic “‘Employee Emotional Intelligence” to present in the training session which will be held on 25th March 2020 at the “MICROSOFT INC” in NEW YORK.

The target audience for such session will be that employees who usually feel difficulties in controlling their emotional state of mind in front of superiors and clients. The primary advantage of this session would be that employees will able to maintain control over their emotions in such situations with the assistance of technique called “Learn and Grow”.

I would need the nominations of the employees from each department who feel that this session will be helpful for them. I would really appreciate if you can get in touch with the HR department of MICROSOFT INC. and provide me the list of such employees by end of this week.

Please feel free to contact me in case of any clarifications.

Yours Sincerely,

Arnold Mathews

Votes
Average: 9.1 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94285714286 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90032447946 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4340004685 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3636363636 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156735731326 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633392228486 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848200783982 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121371756235 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126418366486 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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