You recently traveled by plane. While you were at the airport, a member of staff helped you with a problem, and now you would like to show him/her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager at the airport. In your letter.
1. explain what the problem was
2. say how the member of staff helped you
3. say what you would like the manager to do reward the member of staff
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my views regarding your hospitality services on the security checking and boarding pass section area.
Yesterday, I had to catch a flight for Frankfurt at 3 AM. However, I came to the Airport at 2PM for collecting my boarding pass and have to complete the formalities in regards to security check and Covid test report. Unfortunately, there was a problem with my Covid-19 report and my boarding pass was kept on hold.
I felt worried at the same time because I had only 50 minutes left to collect my air ticket and to onboard the plane because my flight had to departure at 3 am. Yet, I had a word with one of your staff members and he immediately took action to my issue. He took me to the health department for RT-PCR Covid test and was carrying my boarding pass on his behalf. By god’s grace, I got my negative result in 30 minutes, and he gave me the air-ticket by informing me to go at the entrance three to onboard the plane.
I am so grateful for his quick actions in resolving my issue. Therefore, I would request you to please reward him with an amazon gift card of 100 dollars as a token of appreciation. If it is trouble for you to gift him the reward, I would like to volunteer for the same. Please let me know as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ss and have to complete the formalities in regards to security check and Covid test report. U...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to collect my air ticket and to onboard the plane because my flight had to depar...
^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Yours faithfully, Shwatank Bhasin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39299610895 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60416245641 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9601512504 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6428571429 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204496674597 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706257924972 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453427619559 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107535632682 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189075761915 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.