You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say:1) What was the issue there?2) Why wasn't the staff helpful?3)Suggest what can be done about it?

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding unsatisfied customer service in your store located at Shastri Market New Delhi.

Last Saturday I came to your new established store to buy all household items. I purchased many stuff and more and more stuff i wanted to buy. For that i asked one of your salesman who was present at that time. When i asked him, firstly he told he is not aware about the product and also did not know the product is available in the store or not moreover even for that he did not try to find the same in the store. After-that I tried myself to find the same product in the store and i got it. Again i asked him for other product and he simply said sorry. i feel really bad.

So hereby i suggest you before hire a new employee give him full training about the store and products specifications and location. So that he can find easily and customer will not have to in the trouble.

I hope you will apply my suggestion.

thanks and regards
kanwal

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stuff', 'a good deal of stuff'.
Suggestion: much stuff; a good deal of stuff
...to buy all household items. I purchased many stuff and more and more stuff i wanted to buy...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ased many stuff and more and more stuff i wanted to buy. For that i asked one of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd more stuff i wanted to buy. For that i asked one of your salesman who was pres...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sman who was present at that time. When i asked him, firstly he told he is not aw...
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Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so did not know the product is available in the store or not moreover even for th...
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Line 4, column 485, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... find the same product in the store and i got it. Again i asked him for other pr...
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Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...find the same product in the store and i got it. Again i asked him for other prod...
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Line 4, column 502, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oduct in the store and i got it. Again i asked him for other product and he simp...
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Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: I
...other product and he simply said sorry. i feel really bad. So hereby i sugges...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...other product and he simply said sorry. i feel really bad. So hereby i sugges...
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Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sorry. i feel really bad. So hereby i suggest you before hire a new employee ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
... hope you will apply my suggestion. thanks and regards kanwal
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Line 10, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly my suggestion. thanks and regards kanwal
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36413043478 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.320741267 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4780394608 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172394162471 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529406943553 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495738050958 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857106522251 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585058632368 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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