Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to formally complaint about the poor quality of the service offered to me at your shop recently. Allow me to describe the situation in this letter for you. I am a software engineer, so you can anticipate the vitality of a computer to me. Last week, while making a presentation, it suddenly got switched off and even after incessant attempts, it did not turn on.
Thus, I brought it to your store and requested to mend it. After checking it thoroughly, I was told by one of your employee that it's battery is dead and needs replacement. Since, the new battery of that model was not available at that time, he advised me to come after two days. But to my surprise, on my arrival after two days, he said that it would not be possible to get a new battery. When I asked me the reason, he did not give me a satisfactory reply.
In the light of this fact, I want you to take this matter seriously and resolve it on urgent basis as I am intensively in need of my computer. So, I suggest you to arrange a battery as soon as possible.
Seeking your kind assistance.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36666666667 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62097331802 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1201471636 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173477982577 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06653727593 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525519254975 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939382896316 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162550664585 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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