You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed
by a day.Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that it caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and / or some form of compensation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the problem that I encountered at the Istanbul airport last Friday, 24th of July.
I am a regular customer of your airline who traveled to Turkey for a 3 days holiday from 21st to 24th of July and I was supposed to get back to work on 25th.
As a consequence of one day delay that happened as well as your poor service in informing the passengers about the delay, I missed an important meeting with one of our major contractors. therefore the contract couldn't be singed which is worth 4000$.
I would like to ask for compensation, since all the consequences are caused by your airline; thus I am entitled to ask the costs of my return flight to Tehran as well as a letter of apologizing to our contractor.
I look forward for your prompt attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Mahmoud Sajjadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ting with one of our major contractors. therefore the contract couldnt be singed which is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...ting with one of our major contractors. therefore the contract couldnt be singed which is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...jor contractors. therefore the contract couldnt be singed which is worth 4000$. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$4000'.
Suggestion: $4000
...ntract couldnt be singed which is worth 4000$. I would like to ask for compe...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7287805878 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8228354826 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278663012793 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105807063095 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666479729513 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129911364092 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581681987172 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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