You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask your friend to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Joe,
hope you are doing well! it's been long since we communicated last time.Do you remind our previous vacation in Kerala, India? I was going through the amazing photographs you captured during the visit and it took me back to the good old days. While checking the snapshots i realized that, some of the photos are missing and among them the most precious one about lush green forest is lost from my hard drive. it will be a great help if you could you please share it with me in my email?
The picture depicts natural beauty gifted by the mother nature, which explain the importance of trees for the planet earth. Why i am asking to resend the snap because i am invited for a guest lecture organising by a social organisation on the topic "save trees save earth" on next week in the town hall and i decided to keep the picture as my introduction.
I gave my laptop for servicing in last month and i lost many data including my documents and other miscellaneous items. I managed to recover most of the files but, i failed in retrieving the required photo from the backup files.
hoping that you will send the picture at the earliest.
Thanking you,
Tom
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Joe, hope you are doing well! its been long since we communicated last ti...
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...en long since we communicated last time.Do you remind our previous vacation in Ke...
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...ted last time.Do you remind our previous vacation in Kerala, India? I was going t...
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... old days. While checking the snapshots i realized that, some of the photos are m...
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...reen forest is lost from my hard drive. it will be a great help if you could you p...
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...ance of trees for the planet earth. Why i am asking to resend the snap because i ...
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...ganisation on the topic 'save trees save earth' on next week in the tow...
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...to keep the picture as my introduction. I gave my laptop for servicing in last m...
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... laptop for servicing in last month and i lost many data including my documents a...
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...naged to recover most of the files but, i failed in retrieving the required photo...
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... will send the picture at the earliest. Thanking you, Tom
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...e at the earliest. Thanking you, Tom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60377358491 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46960879577 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683962264151 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9399689334 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149225102674 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691179951409 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659257171417 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788749061699 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763703475976 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.