You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask your friend, to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Aman,
I hope you and your family are doing well. It was such a pleasure to see you again on our Jaipur trip. We sure had a great time catching up with each other after so many years. You have always been a cherished friend, no matter how much of a gap there has been since we met.
Anyway, the reason I am writing is that I need a photograph of mine. I hope you remembered we clicked photos in traditional dresses in front of Jal Mahal. Can you please send me that photograph as soon as possible and that too before this Wednesday.
The reason for asking only that particular photograph is that as you know I am applying for modeling. Therefore, in that case, it will be an add-on to my portfolio and next week I am going for an interview.
As you are aware that its rainy season over here and I like to cherish the rain. So, I went in rain along with my waterproof bag. When I returned home, to my surprise the water went inside that bag and it damaged my photograph. I was so upset at that time and then you suddenly struck my mind. Hope you will not let me down.
See you soon and always stay in touch.
Best regards,
Kavita
P.S. I miss you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, so, then, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20888888889 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25624619968 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6543303382 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274437484928 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845771596044 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529334493825 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130193279537 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625190036601 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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