Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment in the shipping services that I availed from your company on June 1, 2019. The shipment was from Bangalore to Ontario and the consignment number is A0056754.
Let me explain the damages to some of the electrical appliances that were a part of the consignment. Firstly, the compressor of my Samsung refrigerator model 5473 has broken and the fridge is not functional. Secondly, the motherboard of my Whirlpool washing machine model 7893 has a short circuit and the buttons are not operational.
Would you kindly arrange for the repair or the replacement of the appliances as detailed in the transit insurance that I purchased from your company. I would appreciate if you could email insurance agent in Ontario and send a copy of the email to my email address worker@gmail.com
Looking forward to a prompt response and a replacement of the appliances at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...56754. Let me explain the damages to some of the electrical appliances that were a part ...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ail to my email address worker@gmail.com Looking forward to a prompt response and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12000401639 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9026900998 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11363587903 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423332505415 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452333356004 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511244070918 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462249545224 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.