You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.
Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
Ask for some form of compensation.
I am writing this letter in order to complain about a car that I rented from your agency recently. When I collected it from your city branch, I noticed clouds of smoke coming from the exhaust pipe. I told your representative that I required a dependable vehicle as I would be making a long journey, and he assured me that I would not have any mechanical difficulties with it. However, as soon as I took it for a longer trip it broke down, leaving me stranded 200 kilometers from the nearest town. To make matters worse, the air conditioning stopped working as well.
Consequently, after several hours of waiting, first for help and then for repairs, I had to drive on in the summer heat. Since I rented this car on your representative’s advice, I feel that I am entitled to request a full refund. I can be contacted at the address or phone number provided. I would greatly appreciate your prompt resolution of this matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, then, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59638554217 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99026460238 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6410161514 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14921327618 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535354912762 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535549430818 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111752645599 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156905767965 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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