Dear Sir,
My name is Kumar S Sampad and I am a resident of Danforth Area in Toronto. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement published in The Daily Star regarding the requirements of volunteers in Charity works for the people on the street suffering due to heavy ice storms in the last couple of days. I am interested to help those victims and owing to this, I would like to give a short brief about my past records.
I have graduated in social science and involved in lots of non-governmental activities for the last 10 years having the same aim of helping people. In fact, these kinds of activities give me an immense mental pleasure in many ways. Besides, it helps me to see the people from a very closer step and develop a real bonding as human to mankind. Last year, I have served myself for the flood-affected people in the Ottawa Area. The submerged area was suffered from the basic supply of food and other staffs and I helped the Red Cross team to navigate properly in that area to faster the delivery process. I think, this time my experience will be good enough to serve the community as well from the humanitarian ground.
For this charity event, I can raise fund from the local people so that a bulk amount of winter clothing can be managed within a short time. Moreover, the used winter jackets and boots, as well as gloves, can be collected from the nearby regions and I can assist to distribute them with my personal vehicle in the Greater Toronto Area. I know, Red Cross and other social organizations are coming up with their wholehearted efforts, but I cannot wait to help the people in my ways too.
I look forward to hearing back to you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a short brief about my past records. I have graduated in social science and in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 315.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55873015873 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60198579127 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.242810266 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137619717464 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422361661161 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345792603604 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850607352064 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193488548341 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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