Dear Sir,
I am writing regarding the advertisement published in the Today News newspaper for the requirement of the volunteers you need. I am willing to take participate in the upcoming charity event, as I have worked for different charities so far such as Humanity Foundation, F&T Club, and Z Square Club in order to help the needy people who suffered from illnesses or natural disasters.
I have a keen interest to work as a volunteer in your charity program for donations and causes because I am working on the thesis related to charity and foundations topic. So, it will be quite helpful for me to attain more knowledge and experience by doing my task with you. Moreover, I will get a chance to meet the hurt people and know about their feelings and emotions. I will also help them by donating funds as much as I can along with providing the first-aid as my father is the professional doctor and he has his own staff. I hope you will consider my request and allow me to become one of your team members.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...from illnesses or natural disasters. I have a keen interest to work as a volun...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to become one of your team members. I look forward to your prompt response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64948453608 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69234062761 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7567533968 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21546254467 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074405561093 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065003115775 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117268645456 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829403295242 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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