You should spend 20 minutes on this task During a recent plane journey you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants Write a lett

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You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
 Remind him when and where you met
 Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
 Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows :
Dear …….. ,

Dear Sir

I am writing this letter with regards to the conversation we had last week on the flight. My name is Niharika, I hope you will recognize me.

We boarded 6ABC76 plane on 27 October last Wednesday, which was from Bangalore to Delhi. I was sitting next to your seat. I remember you discussed about how you started a restaurant and how it became a popular chain of restaurants in city. We had a long conversation about this and during it I informed you I am looking for a job opportunity.

In your knowledge there was some openings in one of your restaurants. I would like to share that I have 6 years of experience in management and human resource, which makes me suitable candidate for managerial roles. I am flexible with shifts as well as I have worked in a Hotel in Delhi for 3 years and in a Club for 3 more.

I believe, my experience can support me in all kind of managerial roles you have currently available at your restaurant. As I have worked mostly in North region, I would be eagerly interested in exploring work culture of Bangalore as well. As I have no family constraints, I am willing to relocate as well.

I would be expecting a positive response from you on this. I would like to hold this opportunity to work with such a hard working person.

Thanks and Regards
Niharika

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear Sir I am writing this letter with regards to the conversation we had last ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er you discussed about how you started a restaurant and how it became a popular c...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r 3 years and in a Club for 3 more. I believe, my experience can support me i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51046025105 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80871278201 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564853556485 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4601587298 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18058561004 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609422523693 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795514380024 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104024983421 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889027664741 0.0580467560999 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.