You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have moved
• describe the new house
• invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Anna,
Hi, how are how. Hope you are having a joyous time. It has been a long time since we have met. I am writing this letter to express my happiness and excitement of shifting to new and bigger house.
The earlier home where we were staying was very small for our family of four members. As there were only two bedrooms with a single bathroom and a small kitchen and living room. Moreover, the place was not well ventilated which caused suffocation problems.
Our new house where we have shifted is not only spacious and comfortable but also very well furnished. It has four bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a big dining room and fully equipped kitchen. Furthermore, there is a big lawn, a beautiful garden in the front where for hosting guests, and a big garage. There is a big park and a shopping mall only a few steps away from mu house
Well, what are you doing this weekend? Can you visit us on Sunday? It would be great fun to have you here. My new address is H10, Lakeshore Apartment, 1500 Rockmoor Avenue, Michigan.
Hope to see you this weekend. Keep in touch.
Lots of love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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| 2020-01-05 | dharanipatel | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...touch. Lots of love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57920792079 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37163849481 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5200193243 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.4117647059 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8823529412 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174425174462 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565177099298 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063694957831 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105411856546 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724983550372 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.