You stayed at a friend s house last weekend and lost your watch Write a letter to your friend In your letter you should Thank him her for the good time you had Describe your watch Tell your friend what would you like him her to do with it

Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you well and happy. I’m writing this letter to express my gratitude for great hospitality at your home last week end. When I reach home I can’t find my Rolex watch.
I reached your sweet home last Saturday. I was too much exhausted with my hectic work schedule so I need a break I have decided to visit your place because you live on outskirt of Karachi which is quite peaceful environment. When I got back home I completely rejuvenated and refresh thanks again for such amazing hospitality.
After weekend, Monday morning I was leaving for office I found that I my wrist watch was missing I think I left at your place, please check in your guest room wardrobe I was Rolex black series B8 it had black dial and brown leather strip
If you find it please send it me through courier DHL.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.

Warm Wishes,
Shoaib

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hospitality at your home last week end. When I reach home I can’t find my Rolex watc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as to, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51829268293 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32906875662 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.71697991 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292913212285 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107756449455 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646336950987 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146749220802 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439305271997 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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