You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it
To whom it may concern,
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to inform you regarding my clothes that I had forgotten at your hotel during the my business trip from 2nd December to 4th.
As it has passed about a few week, I can not remember room number and other details but you could check from hotel data system that it might be West Side Room No: 277. Actually , I was there to participate in sales conference on weekend but due to my flight take off early I found myself in a scurry. Unfortunately, I have forgotten some clothes such as are black suit, long tie and classic a pair of shoes in black wardrobe. Even though some of them are not important , long blue tie has much value to me because it is only one thing that inherit me from my grandfather.
I would be grateful If you could check my room where I stayed and lost and four department of your hotel. I can sent a close-friend to the hotel to pick up the clothes or I wondering that you could post them me by using fast-cargo without paying any charge.
I look forward to hearing from you a positive response the near future.
Your faithfully.
Kevin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...at I had forgotten at your hotel during the my business trip from 2nd December to 4th...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tel during the my business trip from 2nd December to 4th. As it has passed abo...
^^
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun week seems to be countable; consider using: 'few weeks'.
Suggestion: few weeks
...ber to 4th. As it has passed about a few week, I can not remember room number and oth...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ght be West Side Room No: 277. Actually , I was there to participate in sales con...
^^
Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...found myself in a scurry. Unfortunately, I have forgotten some clothes such as ar...
^^
Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... long tie and classic a pair of shoes in black wardrobe. Even though some of them...
^^
Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en though some of them are not important , long blue tie has much value to me be...
^^
Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e not important , long blue tie has much value to me because it is only one thin...
^^
Line 7, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtant , long blue tie has much value to me because it is only one thing that inh...
^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'send'
Suggestion: send
...d four department of your hotel. I can sent a close-friend to the hotel to pick up ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... to the hotel to pick up the clothes or I wondering that you could post them me b...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ast-cargo without paying any charge. I look forward to hearing from you a posi...
^
Line 11, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you a positive response the near future. Your faithfully. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41626794258 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44912292365 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645933014354 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8484681388 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24010339076 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101050008344 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868751674445 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121454342893 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094605218129 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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