You stayed at your friends' house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter in reference to an important file which I forgot at your home while on a business trip to Australia.
First of all, I enjoyed your company a lot especially the kids.I really like your house as it is located in a peaceful locality.I cant thankyou guys enough for the hospitality you showed me especially Liz as she was a superb host.
As you are aware that I had come on a business seminar and had collected some confidential documents in a file. The file has a blue transparent colour with green dots. I believe I have forgotten this at your home probably inside the closet of the guest room. These documents are very critical as they are needed for signing non-disclosure agreements for new business ventures.
I would be thankful if you return this file by post to 15, Crossing Lane, London.
I look forward to seeing you very soon and say hi to kids and Liz.
Warm wishes
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... your company a lot especially the kids.I really like your house as it is located...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...as it is located in a peaceful locality.I cant thankyou guys enough for the hospi...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... it is located in a peaceful locality.I cant thankyou guys enough for the hospitalit...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and say hi to kids and Liz. Warm wishes Alex
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56976744186 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59070184961 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3737527578 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385950441327 0.216113520407 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121676007186 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688970398454 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19247298764 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690043015408 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.