Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my discontent about the service offered by “Chicken Wings Restaurant”. I went with my family on April 10th and we had a bad experience related to the staff service and quality of the dishes.
Fist off, the waiter that received us was rude with us when I required for the reservation I had made in advance, despite I was polite. Secondly, The chicken wings had a strange taste and the salad definitely was not in healthy conditions. Furthermore, the tablecloth was stained and rip and the dishes broken in the borders. When I asked for a solution the manager did not gave us an answer and he was impolite as well.
I would ask for a full refund compensation as soon is possible because we paid for a bad service and we were not able to eat the food. Also, It will be pleasant an apologize from the Manager and the staff because we felt swindled. I hope you will be able to improve your service in the future.
I look forward to hearing from you
Peter Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ff, the waiter that received us was rude with us when I required for the reservat...
^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...sked for a solution the manager did not gave us an answer and he was impolite as wel...
^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eat the food. Also, It will be pleasant an apologize from the Manager and the staff because ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59893048128 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69287312595 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6914621447 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976733561415 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399549974492 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380884539527 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694999113273 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371315564077 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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