Dear Sir,
I recently had dinner at your restaurant- The Rich Spices, Mumbai Branch, with my family. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of the meal served in your restaurant.
We chose your restaurant from the rest because of your promises and claims to deliver flawless customer service. But to my dismay, my experience was completely terrible. The meals took more than 30 minutes to reach the table. On questioning the delay, we were told that all dishes are cooked fresh and hence was bound to take time. But the food was completely cold and appeared stale. Furthermore, one of the dishes was delivered wrong. We had ordered for a chocolate-moose combo but instead your so-called "Rich spices-special" was given, on the pretext of saying that the former was not available. Is this the method of propaganda used by your staff to popularize your own dishes?
I was utterly unhappy with the meal and the services given. I personally think you should reprimand your staff for this behaviour and make sure unethical means are not used for personal motifs.
Thanking you,
Zoya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...s utterly unhappy with the meal and the services given. I personally think you should re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02659574468 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90666547177 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0758157237 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188575456532 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653914228364 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616516228102 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127096496407 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604582748905 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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