You took your family to a nearby restaurant You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
Dear Manager Sarinah Restaurant,
My name is Arie Eko, and I new Customer of your restaurant.
How are you? Hopefully, you and your team are in good condition. Today, I am writing this letter to inform you about my disappointment with your meal.
In short, I choose your restaurant for dinner with my family from my friend's recommendation, where my friend is your regular customer since 2020. Back to my problem about your meal, first of all, I want to say your meal is not good taste and is not good enough for a restaurant with five stars rated. Why I can say that, is because the first meal I order does not cook well or the meal is raw and on the menu, I ordered "Fry Red Fish". Secondly, about the time, after I choose some meal from your menu, it's a long time the service until I get the first food in my table, and that's is a bad experience for me when I visit your five stars restaurant. Consequently, I wrote a bad review about your restaurant and tell to detail about your food on social media.
In the end, I hope you immediately clean up the bad review and make sure everything about the food you serve later is in good condition and also about the serving time of each food you cook.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention.
Arie Eko
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: I_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knew' (past of "to know")?
Suggestion: knew
...staurant, My name is Arie Eko, and I new Customer of your restaurant. How are y...
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Line 6, column 514, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...fter I choose some meal from your menu, its a long time the service until I get the...
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Line 6, column 586, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...l I get the first food in my table, and thats is a bad experience for me when I visit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, second, secondly, so, well, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40928270042 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46602724873 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535864978903 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9245975088 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295475527575 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121460525299 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729728057398 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150836144569 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917554037584 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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