You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase
and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER WITH REGARDS TO THE LOST AND FOUND AUTHORITY OF YOUR COMPANY REGARDING MY MISSING LUGGAGE FROM YOUR PLACE.
A WEEK AGO,I.E. ON 10/11/19 I WAS TRAVELLING BY YOUR E3 FLIGHT FROM TORONTO TO QUEBEC. WHILE, I LANDED IN QUEBEC AND WENT TO LUGGAGE COUNTER TO COLLECT MY BELONGING. I WAS INFORMED THAT ONE OF MY BAGS HAS BEEN MISPLACED IN THE LODGING AND BOARDING PROCEDURE. I WAS ASSURED THAT THE AUTHORITIES WILL LOOK INTO THE MATTER AND THE TROUBLESOME ISSUE WILL BE ADDRESSED WITHIN A WEEK.
MY LUGGAGE THAT IS MISSING HAD SOME VERY IMPORTANT STUFF IN IT. THERE WERE SOME LEGAL PAPERS OF MY PROPERTY, TWO VERY EXPENSIVE BRAND NEW WATCHES, A LAPTOP AND HEADPHONES WHICH BRINGS ME TO UTMOST CONCERN ABOUT THE FACT OF LOSING THEM. THE FOUR WHEELED BAG WAS GREY IN COLOUR WITH A LOGO OF SAFARI ON THE TOP RIGHT CORNER. IT HAD A SCRATCH ON THE FRONT LEFT SIDE AND HAD A RIBBION TIED ON ITS HANDLE.
SINCE,THE INCIDENT TOOK PLACE THREE DAYS BACK AND THERE HAS BEEN NO UPDATE UNTIL NOW. I REQUEST YOU TO FAST FORWARD THE PROCEDURE AND RESOLVE THE ISSUE AT ITS EARLIEST POSSIBILITY. I WOULD BE GLAD IF YOU COULD ATLEAST INFORM ME ABOUT THE CURRENT STATUS OF MY COMPLAINT.AWAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
TOM CRUISE
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| 2019-12-03 | PALAK AHUJA | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER WITH REGARDS TO...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...LUGGAGE FROM YOUR PLACE. A WEEK AGO,I.E. ON 10/11/19 I WAS TRAVELLING BY YOU...
^^
Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... A WEEK AGO,I.E. ON 10/11/19 I WAS TRAVELLING BY YOUR E3 FLIGHT FROM TORONT...
^^
Line 13, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ED BAG WAS GREY IN COLOUR WITH A LOGO OF SAFARI ON THE TOP RIGHT CORNER. IT HAD A...
^^
Line 17, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , THE
...A RIBBION TIED ON ITS HANDLE. SINCE,THE INCIDENT TOOK PLACE THREE DAYS BACK AND...
^^^^
Line 17, column 270, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...BOUT THE CURRENT STATUS OF MY COMPLAINT.AWAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE. YOURS FAITHFULLY ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70222222222 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55242707058 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7305775614 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163529931779 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543029018109 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444079492674 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910896720116 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299995786717 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.