You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline explain what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline explain what happened.
Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it.
Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir / Madam,

I was one of the passengers who took the flight from Brisbane to Sydney on 2nd of July. Unfortunately, my luggage did not come out after the flight. Although I have explained this to Mr . Megan who was in charge at the Luggage Claim Office and I have not heard from him as of now.

My luggage is Black whose size is 55 x 40 x 20 cm. The luggage has two stickers on one side and one yellow heart shape sticker on the other side.

There are a few books and a copy of my thesis in that luggage which I need for the conference on 10th of June.
I would deeply appreciate if you could give me a prompt reply at your most convenient. My flight number and luggage claim number are written below;

Flight No: EM1R7SL
Luggage Claim no.: 12563

Yours faithfully,
Preeti Sharma.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I was one of the passengers who took the...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gage did not come out after the flight. Although I have explained this to Mr . Megan who...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ht. Although I have explained this to Mr . Megan who was in charge at the Luggage ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38666666667 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32279703813 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686666666667 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5363791497 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1111111111 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178746074899 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07123568815 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336861506927 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862071787004 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461053961974 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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