You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule.

Submitted by saba2818 on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 06:50

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to ask for your permission to take Project Management course on thursday evening.

Now a days we are dealing with different type project, this course is all about managing multiple type of project. It will give insight about how to handle the complex project through different techniques.

This couse will provide me with different technique to use at workplace environment for the better performance which will be beneficial for the company.

The class will be on every thursday starting at 5:30pm so it will be suitable for me to leave the office at 5:00pm so that i can reach on time. It is a two month course and will end on November.

I look forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,
Saba Khan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...nagement course on thursday evening. Now a days we are dealing with different type proj...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ment course on thursday evening. Now a days we are dealing with different type proj...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to leave the office at 5:00pm so that i can reach on time. It is a two month co...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90839694656 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60326609236 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664122137405 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9965276438 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19801374953 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958853639238 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588928947121 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109507596789 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741629169772 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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