you want to improve your knowledge for foreign language which can help you at work write a letter to foreign langur and say where did you hear about the teacher why do you want to learn the foreign language ask some question about the course

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you want to improve your knowledge for foreign language which can help you at work write a letter to foreign langur and say
-where did you hear about the teacher .
-why do you want to learn the foreign language
-ask some question about the course

Dear sir
I am smith .I hope you are good in health. I am writing this letter to ask you the details of the coming french language course of your institutions.
Recently ,I got to know that about you from one of my peer colleague who was once year student .by both of us working in the same organization she insisted that i should contact you actually i want to learn the advanced french as it required for my job i am project manager in my company thus i interact with a numerous client apple for of clients or french spoken .although i can conserve with them in english i spores i can communicate more efficiently with them if i speak their native language more over prophecy and french will be additional skills that i can add in my resume .
before I joined the class i would like to have answer of a few queries. How much time do you think i will need to be a flute french language and how much will you charge for the lesson also will i be taught to read and write french in addition to speaking at .
I am looking forward from your prompt and positive response .
your faithfully
smith

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...d from your prompt and positive response . your faithfully smith
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...om your prompt and positive response . your faithfully smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, so, thus, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29951690821 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.431072475 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.716194959 44.8134815571 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 2.54639175258 1021% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253158811938 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105074317505 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084820279322 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143893776629 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823129323104 0.0580467560999 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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