Dear John,
How are you? I was thinking about the talk we had last time we meet. You were searching for a new car, did you find any ? If not, i am considering to sell my car and i believe that it has the right features that you were searching.
Firstly, my Ford Escort model has a short mileage usage compared with other cars that have same year of production. You know i use it rarely, i hate traffic and i usually use my bike when going for work. Secondly, i have made generic and electric controls and everything was in its standards.
You know i like being unique so i have installed a brand new audio box system which i think you would love. The car is free form scratches and other damages. For more i was thinking that i will sell my ford to you for a better price if you decide to buy it, you know you my buddy.
I look forward to you response, if you have any question or request you know where to find me.
Yours sincerely
Andi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ot, i am considering to sell my car and i believe that it has the right features ...
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... have same year of production. You know i use it rarely, i hate traffic and i usu...
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...hing was in its standards. You know i like being unique so i have installed a...
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...lled a brand new audio box system which i think you would love. The car is free f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20652173913 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22717134143 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8389773617 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274140463611 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104267646321 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693977731201 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153815648005 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574374379691 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.