Dear Dipti,
How are you? I hope you are doing well. As you are aware, I am in the process of shifting my residence from Delhi to Mumbai. Since the electronic appliances are fragile and prone to accident, I am selling out most of them.
Last month when we met, you mentioned that you were planning to buy a second hand television. And since I am planning to sell my television, I thought you might be interested in buying it.
My television set is a silver grey 2000W Philips LED TV with surround sound speakers. It is an HD TV with excellent sound and picture quality. I bought it an year back and it is still under warranty for another year.
In case you are interested, please drop by this weekend between 9 am and 11 am. Hpe to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... sound and picture quality. I bought it an year back and it is still under warrant...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43448275862 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48520951825 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703448275862 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8742735848 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.5833333333 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229018179465 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867364075384 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791699018819 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141058287433 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972405596021 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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