You were hurt in a minor accident in a supermarket, and you wish to complaint to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say
Who you are
Give details about the accident
Dear Mr. Sharma
I am writing this letter to register a complaint about an incident that happened with me at your super mall on 20 March while shopping in your supermarket.
My Name is Vikas and I have been doing grocery from your super mart for 2 years. I visit the store every month for monthly grocery. Moreover, I had been extremely satisfied with the organisation of goods in the market until the accident took place.
It all happened when I was trying to pull out a 10 Kg oil tin from the rack and suddenly all the adjacent oil cans started coming out. Fortunately, I moved away in time; however, my toe’s nail broke from the middle during this accident. Furthermore, no first aid facility was available in the supermarket at that time.
Firstly, I would suggest you to keep on monitoring the placement of heavy objects on racks so that such incidents can be avoided in future. Secondly, make sure the availability of first aid kit every time in the market.
I hope you will look into the matter and would take appropriate actions to provide customers a hassle free shopping experience.
Yours sincerely,
Vikas sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Sharma I am writing this letter to regi...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s so that such incidents can be avoided in future. Secondly, make sure the availability o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73737373737 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6195134723 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70202020202 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.987394708 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161961131473 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472143334903 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544527930203 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795681306926 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645408445128 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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