Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing to explain about a problem in regard to a printer I have recently bought.
My name is Pooneh and my customer number is 33H45F. I have been told that I could rely on your products as your company has a good reputation for selling good quality equipment.
I have recently bought a printer which I need for my domestic job. Although I wanted to use it at home, I preferred to buy an advanced printer which is even suitable for working in big companies. But, Unfortunately, I am not satisfied with the quality. I was told by your staff to change the cartridge and even specific lens, and I did so, but without any success.
Actually, it is very important for me to have the printed sheets very clear as I issue them for my customers on a regular basis. I am sure you understand how it is important to have the related documents printed precise and legible.
As, according to the contract, it is impossible to ask for a refund, I hope you will change the appliance for me as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you and knowing about the way I could have my printer changed.
Yours faithfully,
Pooneh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion for selling good quality equipment. I have recently bought a printer which I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, as to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53301886792 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63902764141 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0672333612 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227746129255 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762820872248 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346207199864 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100941567325 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319580993749 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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