Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about an HP computer monitor that I purchased from your store on Jun15th, reference number: 852345. This computer monitor also has 2 years warranty.
As you know I work from as a computer engineer, and nowadays I am working from home. Hence, it is mandatory for me to have a good quality of computer systems. The monitor I purchased was working alright for some time, however, all of a sudden the display started to appear blurred abruptly. Also, the volume monitor making an unusual sound which is worrisome. I also tried to restart the computer but it did not solve the issue. This issue is causing huge inconvenience to me as I am unable to save the work while I restart the computer, I have a deadline to deliver this project by the end of the week and I am afraid I will not be able to complete it as the monitor is not working properly. I am due for a promotion if I am not able to complete this task on time, I am afraid I might lose the opportunity. This is not only causing distress but also hampering my work.
I would really appreciate if you can replace the faulty monitor immediately or repair it since it is still under warranty. I can bring it to the store this evening or you can send an agent to pick it from my home. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... send an agent to pick it from my home. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, really, so, still, while, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35968379447 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51943964447 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.564328838 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7857142857 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142467635558 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537671730713 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280472914565 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925515433144 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00783110776206 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.