You work for an international company and like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your leller
Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Nick,
I am writing to inform you regarding my desire to work in an overseas branch. I have recently done certification in AWS that ensure me to grab an opportunity to work in a branch located in the US. They are conducting training sessions along with given chance to work with them for six months. As this is the golden time to polish my skills so I wish to be there for the required period.
I assure you in my absence, work would not be hampered as I already trained my assistant to perform all the task with ease.
Also, I ensure that I will make all the proper arrangements to carry my work smoothly here without any hurdle.
You are requested to arrange ticket fare and two days of accommodation there. I will highly appreciate your cooperation.
Thank you for your consideration.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Andrew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r your consideration. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely ...
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Line 23, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Andrew
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75324675325 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69492254478 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5200863793 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5454545455 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276039741431 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103558488989 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575496677849 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127185651081 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727030519288 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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