Dear Mr. Smith ;
I am writing this letter to tell you about my new position in your company, as you are aware I am working for your company for about six years in the design department, and recently I got promoted to be a team manager in the international advertisement campaign. So that I decided to go to your head office in France for six months of training courses that they have and also worked there for six months until my classes end well.
In addition, I am talked to my assistant Mrs. Maanavi to manage everything while I am in head office, she is a really responsible person that I can trust her and she is a great graphic designer, I absolutely believe in her ability to manage our project.
I am hoping if you are signing my application in order so I can start my courses in Paris which is necessary because they ask me to provide your approval.
I have really appreciated your consideration and waiting for your answer
Yours sincerely
Sogol Hassani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsideration and waiting for your answer Yours sincerely Sogol Hassani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52840909091 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71761396154 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.098283081 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340417036245 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152006666013 0.0766984524023 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130366001122 0.0603063233224 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175208312569 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159355910399 0.0580467560999 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.