You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say
- How has your job changed?
- Describe a type of training you will need.
- Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.
I am writing this letter requesting you to make necessary training arrangements on CAD technology In addition, team-handling skills.
As you are aware that, I was, working as a PLM engineer until last month, and now promoted as Team leader. My new role and projects demands, knowledge of CAD technologies and team handling skills. While this exciting and challenging. I would like to bring to your notice that, since the technology is new to me and I have less experience in team handling, it would be difficult for me to execute the project within the stipulated period.
Hence, I would ask you to arrange appropriated trainings. This will help me to improve my designing skills. So that we I will be able to mentor the team and work more efficiently to complete the project with good quality and meet the project milestones.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully.
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...rward to hearing from you. Thank you, Yours faithfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.80097087379 4.54256449028 150% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.92850426215 2.54303337028 233% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606796116505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 248.207574421 44.8134815571 554% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.125 76.5299724578 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850126534191 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881271854764 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868440790722 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872134654608 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763899600663 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 8.37731958763 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 70.7449484536 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 22.46 8.71597938144 258% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 38.5 8.62886597938 446% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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